This year Marisofi had many many great days, but recently, she just had one of the best ones. A lot of the best days she has had have been from trips, but this one was a Wednesday here at Torreón. It was October 21, the back to the future day.
At school, she had a normal day, she had theater, and she likes that class. Nothing to stress her happened, and she really was happy about that. When she was in math class, at the last period, Susy D. and Marisofi were talking about the movie.
"I think I'm going to watch it today, I really want to," Marisofi said.
"Yeah, me too. But I don't have the dvd," replied Susy.
That's when somebody said, "Hey, did you know they're in the movies right now?"
Susy and Marisofi both looked at each other. "Really?! We NEED to go!"
After the bell rang, they went downstairs, Marisofi to look for her brother, and Susy to look for her's. When they all found each other, they had the idea that the four of them should go to watch it in the movies. That's when Marisofi remember it was Wednesday, and Wednesdays she goes to church to a group were they do different kinds of things.
"I'm not going to be able to go," she said, "I really need to go because today is important, I have to give an announcement to everybody."
"Oh, come on!" said Eduardo, Marisofi's brother. "Just today, please! It's one in a lifetime! This day won't happen again, think about it. Besides, we can go and say hi to all of our friends after the movie ends, I promise.
That made Marisofi change her mind, and decided that it really was just one day that wouldn't come again.
"Okay! Let's go today then!" she agreed.
She didn't stay to eat at school because she had her leg injured and she couldn't train, so she went to eat at home. After that, she went to therapy, slept a little while, and finally came back home to change to go to the mall. They got there, found Susy and her brother Carlos and then went inside. But before that, they bought some popcorn and icee, which made her day better, because she loved this. They really enjoyed the movie, well all of them really liked this trilogy a lot. While they were inside watching the movie, Eduardo told Marisofi, "Isn't that Cristy?"
"Where? Oh yes! She is!" she said.
Cristy was Marisofi's swimming coach from when she was 9 years old for until about 4 years, and since 2 years ago, she hadn't seen her. They both said hi to each other with a great hug. This made her so happy because it was a long time since she had seen her.
After the movie ended, they all said they had a great time. Susy and Carlos went home, but Marisofi and Eduardo went to the group. While they were driving, they noticed that it was the exact time that Marty and Doc were going back to the present in the movie, and they really felt it even though it was just fiction. In the way there, they saw a car, and because they've just seen Cristy, they remembered that she had one like that one. When they were just passing by side to that car, they saw it was actually her. This was very funny because they didn't actually thought she will. They even spoke in their cars with the window opened and not stoping! This was very funny and made their day even greater. When they finally got to church, they saw the activity was over, but they still got down to say hi to all of their friends, because they were all still there waiting for their parents to pick them up. Even though they were there only for 20 minutes, they laughed a lot and realized how that day had been very special.
You don't really need money or be any far from your city to really have a great time. People and friends are what make it awesome. They realized how one day with being just with friends can make it really unforgettable, even though they weren't really that big events, and having one of this days on a plain Wednesday in the middle of the week was okay once in a while. They were very thankful for having that awesome day and friends.
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